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Hello Jakub,

It's going well, though this one is going to be about 20% longer than the other two it looks like, so probably a couple more days to go to test readers. My estimate was for around 100k words and it's currently at 110k with at least another 10-20k to go.

I don't want to rush the ending just to save a couple extra days.

Hey Nicholas,

Thank you for your response.

Not wanting to lose half of your royalty income that comes from the exclusivity deal makes absolute perfect sense. Especially considering that Amazon currently has the largest market share for ebooks by quite a large margin.

I wanted to reach out because of Amazon’s recent decision to remove the “Download & Transfer via USB” feature. I’ve read far too many horror stories over the years about people losing access to their Amazon accounts, and thus their purchases, or more recently about them removing ebooks without warning from their customer’s libraries. These may very well be fringe cases, but this behavior has made me wary of purchasing ebooks from them. The only reasonable way I can see to safeguard an ebook purchase is to buy from a platform that still allows their customers to keep a copy on their local hard drive so that they can have the option to side-load their purchase onto their devices.

That being said, I have purchased the first two books on Amazon and still intend to purchase your upcoming books either way. As one of your readers, I wanted to express my interest in other ebook platforms, or if there is a possibility, for customers to have the option to get a copy directly from you or Tohmes Books after showing a proof of purchase.

I created a temporary email address if you still would like to contact me. chilltemp97@pm.me

Best Regards,

Chill

AN2 hands down

There could be any number of things they haven't found yet. Clever way to sneak an idea in you'd like to see, though. :D

btw, would you like to be one of the test readers for the new book or Sheol 3 when it comes out? The LitRPG one I'm trying to get out this year, Sheol 3 will probably be quarter 2 of 2025 if I can really focus in.

Each of those is a backstory item that will come up as the characters get more fleshed out in each successive book. All the main girls already have a full story for that. I considered making them short stories unto themselves, but rest assured, nobody the Alliant put on the Sheol is innocent with the exception of the political prisoners who were more "technically" guilty, and they are all there for capital crimes.

The only thing that really differentiates the "good" from the "bad" were the intentions with which they committed their crimes. Lilia's crime is probably the most revealed so far, and book 3 is on her planet so you'll get the full story there. For Reverie, I'll hint at secondary consequences of her actions. The twins I think you can figure out from the context so far, if only in general terms. If Phyra were to be caught and sentenced she'd have all of the war crimes of her people pinned on her. Even Aia has now committed some capital crimes as applied to artificial intelligences.

The robot issue is complex, but in general terms, an all robot army just has too many vulnerabilities from an electronic warfare standpoint. They're terrifying combatants, but there are ways to either shut them off wholesale, or worse still, turn them back on their operators. (Also, there is a very, very good reason you wouldn't send anything robotic against the Ashtor, but that's not going to come up for at least 3 books). Drones are a bit of a different story as they're simple, cheap, can travel in shielded containers before being launched, and can be utilized in more surgical ways that the enemy may not be ready to deal with.

Even so, you saw what happened to the special forces team that the Alliant sent onto the ship at Zephyr. Fiona took out their tech advantage before they even made contact and in a few cases, used their own technology to murder them. Once they lost the advantage of surprise, their power armor became a serious liability to someone with her technical talents. They'd have a similar problem with someone like Greye, once he has fully shed his soft, civilian mindset.

In space, drones can be spread out wide enough that something like an EMP would affect very few of them and there is nothing to obstruct a directed-laser guidance system, so they could not be easily jammed. There is the problem of speed, though. Chasing something that is nearing relativistic speed makes things like missiles and drones an unlikely weapon. You'd need energy weapons almost exclusively to have any chance of hitting. Fighters, drones, and missiles are more territorial weapon types, for fighting over a planet or space station, for example. Something you want to capture rather than just launch a meteor at from trillions of miles away and obliterate. One of the reason the Ashtor took out the orbital ring on Zephyr so quickly is because they weren't trying to capture it. Blasting it to bits with mass driver fire was fairly easy, seeing as it is stationary, relatively speaking. Atmospheric weaponry is another interesting one. Energy weapons won't breach an atmosphere, they just get diffused away, so you either have to use mass drivers, or a specialized type of plasma weaponry.

All of this also illustrates why nobody could believe that the Sheol still had its mass driver systems. Why would a prison ship need anti-material/planet weapons? It should have been stripped of anything that wasn't primarily for anti-ship defense. You'll get some hints on that one in book 3.

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Artificial workforces are 100% a thing, but there are harsh regulations against allowing a full General AI to embody itself, so they remain limited in their capacity. Most working robots are also highly specialized by necessity, and people are not, so for less common general tasks people are still by far the cheaper option for employers. Why try to program something with a trillion different functions when you can just pay some schmuck minimum wage to go do it instead? Several Alliant species are having population crises, but there are plenty more that are quite the opposite, so they have no shortage of labor. Or they didn't before the war, anyway.

Companions are a bit of a hiccup in that equation, because what they have is not exactly general AI, but also not exactly specialized AI. They are a bit of a mysterious proprietary technology and you're going to learn a lot more about them in book 3. But the short answer is that the corporation that makes them only makes them for the role they've assigned, and they don't share their patents. Leadership within companies and governmental organizations that have tried to reverse engineer their tech for other uses have had a well publicized habit of becoming fatally accident prone until those operations are shut down.

And you are correct, they do not have the right to raise children absent their Host.

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As for Greye's clothes... well, with the Cutters wiped out and their successful escape from the Alliant fleet at Zephyr, problem number one on the ship is resupply. That being said, there are no male Eisheth, so I guess you'll have to wait and see what he comes up with. :P